Tuesday, August 5, 2008

haiku allergy prayer #1

goddess please help me
not remain a lezzie who
achoos coos for cats

Edit Note: I welcome anyone's haiku prayer for the day/week. The structure is three lines with five syllables in the first, seven in the second, and five for the last. Give it a try? Would love to hear whatever/angry/hopeful/whimsical. xxoD.

7 comments:

mulberry said...

haiku for new friends

mirror in blogland
you show my fears, joys, wonders
women click hellos

Anonymous said...

We walk on thin ice
With a dream close to our hearts
Oh the joy of it


Shenandoah

Amy said...

I am a mommy
missing all that should have been
please let this one live

mulberry said...
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Anonymous said...

I am too lazy
to put much effort into
such an exercise

But because I like you, I thought I would try one out anyway! My partner just walked in on me clapping my way through the syllables (still not sure if I got it right-- oh well) and looked at me as if I was nuts. I don't think I have clapped out syllables in a long long time...

I am going to think about Haikus... I promise to try and come up with a better one for you...

Sarah said...

Blessed is haiku
It’s structure, form and rhythm
Easier then life

dakota said...

Thank you for these. They are all great -- even with half dozen only writing cause she likes me ;)

Here's one more for my day today:

Feelings hide and seek
I wish they would point the way
Then keep doubts at bay